[sg16-avd] 答复: [T16Q5] Re: The first version of H.245 output text. It's too large for me to send. I zip it.

Paul E. Jones paulej at packetizer.com
Sun Feb 15 15:34:02 EST 2015


Liang,

"DTLSSecurityCapability" is a new SEQUENCE defined, but it should have 
an extension marker at the end for extensibility.

Sorry I missed that on the first review.

Paul

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Subject: 答复: [T16Q5] Re: The first version of H.245 output text. It's 
too large for me to send. I zip it.

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>Hi all,
>
>I changed all the points listed below. Please check again.
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>Thank you and Best regards,
>Liang Wang
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>"Paul E. Jones" <paulej at packetizer.com>
>2015/02/14 19:46
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>[T16Q5] Re: The first version of H.245 output text. It's too large for 
>me to send. I zip it.
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>Liang, et al,
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>For "DataProtocolCapability", I noted the "extendedDataCapability" was 
>added at the end of "DataProtocolCapability".  However, to advertise or 
>use a "DataApplicationCapability", the "application" choice must be 
>selected.  Should the "extendedDataCapability" be added to the 
>"application" choice?  Or was it really intended to be at the end of 
>the structure.  If the latter, then what would be the "application" 
>choice for most "extendedDataCapability" usages?
>
>For the "DataChannel" SEQUENCE, please add an extension marker after 
>"dataChannelProfile" in case new elements are added in the future.
>
>In U.2:
>* "a SCTP association" should be "an SCTP association"
>* there is an extra space between the words "The endpoint"
>* In the second paragraph, there is an extra space at the start of the 
>paragraph
>* In U.3, change "/[ITU-T H.235.DTLS]" to be "/H.235.DTLS [121]" for 
>consistency with the rest of H.245
>* change "If the establishmentType for the data channel indicates 
>“DCEP”, once the..." to "If the establishmentType for the data channel 
>indicates “DCEP” and once the ..."  The reason is that there is another 
>comma following almost immediately, so it makes the sentence more 
>difficult to read.
>* I would suggest a similar change to the first sentence in U.4.  That 
>said, that sentence has a lot of "and"s in it.  I'm not sure which 
>reads better.
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>Thanks!
>Paul
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>Subject: The first version of H.245 output text. It's too large for me 
>to send. I zip it.
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>Hi every experts,
>
>This is the first version of H.245 output text.
>It incluedes C.721, C.722, C.723, C.724 and C.828R1.
>Please have a look.  Any suggestion please tell me.
>
>BTW: my fight is on Tuesday afternoon next week. so I cann't attend the 
>Q2's session in that afternoon. Sorry.
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>Thank you and Best regards,
>Liang Wang
>
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