[sg16-avd] [T16Q5] Re: The first version of H.245 output text. It's too large for me to send. I zip it.

Stephen Botzko stephen.botzko at gmail.com
Sat Feb 14 06:56:55 EST 2015


Should the "extendedDataCapability" be added to the "application" choice?
I missed that, thx.

It should be at the end of the choice.  That is consistent with the audio
and video usage.

Stephen

On Sat, Feb 14, 2015 at 12:46 PM, Paul E. Jones <paulej at packetizer.com>
wrote:

>  Liang, et al,
>
> For "DataProtocolCapability", I noted the "extendedDataCapability" was
> added at the end of "DataProtocolCapability".  However, to advertise or use
> a "DataApplicationCapability", the "application" choice must be selected.
> Should the "extendedDataCapability" be added to the "application" choice?
> Or was it really intended to be at the end of the structure.  If the
> latter, then what would be the "application" choice for most
> "extendedDataCapability" usages?
>
> For the "DataChannel" SEQUENCE, please add an extension marker after
> "dataChannelProfile" in case new elements are added in the future.
>
> In U.2:
> * "a SCTP association" should be "an SCTP association"
> * there is an extra space between the words "The endpoint"
> * In the second paragraph, there is an extra space at the start of the
> paragraph
> * In U.3, change "/[ITU-T H.235.DTLS]" to be "/H.235.DTLS [121]" for
> consistency with the rest of H.245
> * change "If the establishmentType for the data channel indicates “DCEP”,
> once the..." to "If the establishmentType for the data channel indicates
> “DCEP” and once the ..."  The reason is that there is another comma
> following almost immediately, so it makes the sentence more difficult to
> read.
> * I would suggest a similar change to the first sentence in U.4.  That
> said, that sentence has a lot of "and"s in it.  I'm not sure which reads
> better.
>
>
> Thanks!
> Paul
>
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> Subject: The first version of H.245 output text. It's too large for me to
> send. I zip it.
>
>
>
>
> Hi every experts,
>
> This is the first version of H.245 output text.
> It incluedes C.721, C.722, C.723, C.724 and C.828R1.
> Please have a look.  Any suggestion please tell me.
>
> BTW: my fight is on Tuesday afternoon next week. so I cann't attend the
> Q2's session in that afternoon. Sorry.
>
>
>
>
> Thank you and Best regards,
> Liang Wang
>
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