APC-1372 correction

Sakae OKUBO okubo at MXZ.MESHNET.OR.JP
Fri May 1 23:00:33 EDT 1998


Dear Mr. Webber,

Thank you very much for your comments to APC-1372 (report of the
Yokosuka meeting). I have updated it as APC-1372r1.doc which is availabe
at /Incoming.

>In 5.5.3, APC-1353 discussion, "border GK" is mistakenly spelled
>"boarder GK" (which would mean a GK living in one's home)
>throughout.  This error is also found elsewhere in the text.

Corrected.

>In the discussion of APC-1356 and APC-1366, "extend" is given as
>"extent".

Corrected.

>Mr David Lindbergh's name is sometimes misspelled as "Lindberg".

Corrected.

>The ISO BONDING document, ISO/IEC 13871, exists in at least two
>versions,both still available from ISO.  Some care might be taken in
>specifying the version, since it appears that some important
>corrections might have been made between versions of the
>document.

An editor (IU (Js note has been inserted: {Editor (IU (Js note: ISO/IEC 13871 exists
in at least two versions, both still available from ISO.  Some care
might be taken in specifying the version.}

>In 6.2.4, could "We need an encapsulation scheme for H.281 to replace
>or adapt H.224 to TCP or UDP." be clarified by replacing with "We need
>an encapsulation scheme for H.281 to replace H.224 or adapt H.224 to
>TCP or UDP."?

Accepted.

Best regards,

Sakae OKUBO



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