Hello Albrecht, all, I agree with Albrechts suggestions. With regards to the Generic Package I think its is a typo that change be changed as extension rules say this must be a versioning of the package. With regards to your comments ABS7 "Wording of sentence? Makes this sense?" I think the sentence should read "Allowed terminations type combinations in a context". With regards to your comments ABS8 " Note: an ALCATEL contribution to next SG16 is planned proposing “§ 5.8.7 Notify” inclusion". I'm happy to accept this as Notify is a command and should be listed. Regards, Christian PS: Kevin: Did I miss week 4 ABNF sections? I'll send some comments on week 4 in the next couple of days. Albrecht.Schwarz@alcatel.de wrote:

I found two further typos in Appendix II. -> Revision "...r1" file in Incoming directory again.

Regards Albrecht

Albrecht

SCHWARZ/DE/ALCAT To: SG16 <itu-sg16@external.cisco.com> EL@ALCATEL cc: jan.lindquist@ERICSSON.COM Subject: H.248.1 V3 Editorial Comments: Week 5 13.06.2005 18:25

FYI,

I've uploaded comments from ALCATEL side to "Week 5" in the "Incoming" directory:

http://ftp3.itu.int/av-arch/avc-site/Incoming/TD7%20Week%205%20Comments% 20ASchwarz.doc

Major (technical) update is Generic Package Version 2 (instead V1) due to inclusion of "onIteration" capability in my opinion.

Also just the note that Alcatel contributions for next SG16 are in planning with regard to: 1) § E.11.5 "recommendations on statistics usage), and 2) App. II (new § 5.8.6 Notify)

Regards Albrecht