Kevin, thanks for your effort! Can imagine that you can't see the text anymore;-) Nevertheless; I'd like to propose some more editorial change proposals, almost all originating from types or space characters. Unfortunately I'm unable to upload my comments on the avc site: http://ftp3.itu.int/av-arch/avc-site/Incoming/ "You don't have permission to access /av-arch/avc-site/Incoming/ on this server." That's why I'll send the file TD9 Updated Draft_h248.1v3 Clean_commentsALCATEL.doc in a separate email to Kevin directly. Regards Albrecht "Kevin Boyle" <kboyle@nortel.c To: itu-sg16@external.cisco.com om> cc: Subject: H.248.1 Editing meeting 27.06.2005 11:36 All, I have uploaded two versions of the working document to the Incoming folder on the FTP site -- one with change marks as TD8R1 and one without as TD9. These reflect all the changes through all 5 weeks thus far. The only change I have not made was the addition of Notify to the profile template. There seems to be a problem with the FTP site, in that it will not list the contents of the folders. Once that problem has been resolved, I will update the document to include it. Please look over the document. I have been over the spec in great detail making the capitalization uniform as best I can. If you see any cases that do not align with the rest of the document, please let me know. Also, have a look across the document for the changes you suggested. In some cases, I took the suggestion for change and altered the wording a little differently than suggested. In some cases there were multiple changes to the same place suggested, and I did the best I could to merge the suggestions. Hopefully I have captured the intent of all. I hope you all find my many hours of work satisfactory. As a reminder, this is the week to suggest any further edits. The document that emerges at the end of this week will be the input document to Geneva. Kevin