Hi all,

I changed all the points listed below. Please check again.




Thank you and Best regards,
Liang Wang


"Paul E. Jones" <paulej@packetizer.com>

2015/02/14 19:46
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[T16Q5] Re: The first version of H.245 output text. It's too large for me to send. I zip it.





Liang, et al,
 
For "DataProtocolCapability", I noted the "extendedDataCapability" was added at the end of "DataProtocolCapability".  However, to advertise or use a "DataApplicationCapability", the "application" choice must be selected.  Should the "extendedDataCapability" be added to the "application" choice?  Or was it really intended to be at the end of the structure.  If the latter, then what would be the "application" choice for most "extendedDataCapability" usages?
 
For the "DataChannel" SEQUENCE, please add an extension marker after "dataChannelProfile" in case new elements are added in the future.
 
In U.2:
* "a SCTP association" should be "an SCTP association"
* there is an extra space between the words "The endpoint"
* In the second paragraph, there is an extra space at the start of the paragraph
* In U.3, change "/[ITU-T H.235.DTLS]" to be "/H.235.DTLS [121]" for consistency with the rest of H.245
* change "If the establishmentType for the data channel indicates “DCEP”, once the..." to "If the establishmentType for the data channel indicates “DCEP” and once the ..."  The reason is that there is another comma following almost immediately, so it makes the sentence more difficult to read.
* I would suggest a similar change to the first sentence in U.4.  That said, that sentence has a lot of "and"s in it.  I'm not sure which reads better.
 
 
Thanks!
Paul
 
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Subject: The first version of H.245 output text. It's too large for me to send. I zip it.
 


Hi every experts,

This is the first version of H.245 output text.
It incluedes C.721, C.722, C.723, C.724 and C.828R1.
Please have a look.  Any suggestion please tell me.

BTW: my fight is on Tuesday afternoon next week. so I cann't attend the Q2's session in that afternoon. Sorry.




Thank you and Best regards,
Liang Wang


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