This is week 4.  Let's not get ahead of ourselves, especially since I am still catching up from the Great Capitalization Change that took me literally days of effort to work through.

All should note: my email address changed some time ago to kboyle@nortel.com.  Use of the nortelnetworks.com address will start being rejected in the next day or so.

Kevin

-----Original Message-----
From: Christian Groves [mailto:christian.groves@ERICSSON.COM]
Sent: Wednesday, June 15, 2005 2:55 AM
To: Albrecht.Schwarz@alcatel.de
Cc: itu-sg16@external.cisco.com; kboyle@nortelnetworks.com
Subject: Re: Update r1; Re: H.248.1 V3 Editorial Comments: Week 5

Hello Albrecht, all,

I agree with Albrechts suggestions. With regards to the Generic Package I think its is a typo that change be changed as extension rules say this must be a versioning of the package.

With regards to your comments ABS7   "Wording of sentence? Makes this sense?" I
think the sentence should read "Allowed terminations type combinations in a context".

With regards to your comments ABS8 "  Note: an ALCATEL contribution to next SG16 is planned proposing "§ 5.8.7 Notify" inclusion". I'm happy to accept this as Notify is a command and should be listed.

Regards, Christian

PS: Kevin: Did I miss week 4 ABNF sections? I'll send some comments on week 4 in the next couple of days.

Albrecht.Schwarz@alcatel.de wrote:

> I found two further typos in Appendix II.
> -> Revision "...r1" file in Incoming directory again.
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> Regards
> Albrecht
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> jan.lindquist@ERICSSON.COM                                             
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> I've uploaded comments from ALCATEL side to "Week 5" in the "Incoming"
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> Major (technical) update is Generic Package Version 2 (instead V1) due
> to inclusion of "onIteration" capability in my opinion.
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> Also just the note that Alcatel contributions for next SG16 are in
> planning with regard to:
> 1) § E.11.5 "recommendations on statistics usage), and
> 2) App. II (new § 5.8.6 Notify)
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> Regards
> Albrecht
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