Hello Albrecht, all,
I agree with Albrechts suggestions. With regards to the Generic Package I think its is a typo that change be changed as extension rules say this must be a versioning of the package.
With regards to your comments ABS7 "Wording of sentence? Makes this sense?" I think the sentence should read "Allowed terminations type combinations in a context".
With regards to your comments ABS8 " Note: an ALCATEL contribution to next SG16 is planned proposing “§ 5.8.7 Notify” inclusion". I'm happy to accept this as Notify is a command and should be listed.
Regards, Christian
PS: Kevin: Did I miss week 4 ABNF sections? I'll send some comments on week 4 in the next couple of days.
Albrecht.Schwarz@alcatel.de wrote:
I found two further typos in Appendix II. -> Revision "...r1" file in Incoming directory again.
Regards Albrecht
Albrecht SCHWARZ/DE/ALCAT To: SG16
itu-sg16@external.cisco.com EL@ALCATEL cc: jan.lindquist@ERICSSON.COM Subject: H.248.1 V3 Editorial Comments: Week 5 13.06.2005 18:25
FYI,
I've uploaded comments from ALCATEL side to "Week 5" in the "Incoming" directory:
http://ftp3.itu.int/av-arch/avc-site/Incoming/TD7%20Week%205%20Comments% 20ASchwarz.doc
Major (technical) update is Generic Package Version 2 (instead V1) due to inclusion of "onIteration" capability in my opinion.
Also just the note that Alcatel contributions for next SG16 are in planning with regard to:
- § E.11.5 "recommendations on statistics usage), and
- App. II (new § 5.8.6 Notify)
Regards Albrecht